Welcome to part 2 of our series where we demystify copywriting formulas.
Yesterday we talked about a good one to grab people's attention and move them to action, AIDA.
Today we look at a formula that's super versatile (sales pages, landing pages, emails, mid-page section copy and more). Especially when your prospects have a very vivid pain in mind.
Enter PAS.
PAS (Problem, Agitate, Solution) focuses on identifying the reader's problem, agitating it by highlighting the pain points, and then offering a solution to the problem.
Use the PAS framework when you want to address a specific problem that your target audience faces and position your product or service as the solution. PAS is particularly effective for creating copy that resonates emotionally with the reader, making it suitable for sales pages and landing pages.
Pro tip: add an extra "O" to the formula to show your readers the outcome that your solution will give them. It will act as a powerful extra push if you can make it really vivid and compelling.
And for even extra oomph, particularly in email campaigns where you want to create excitement and expectation, finish up with an extra "P". PASOP is the classic "open loop" framework. You go from problem to outcome of solving it and then introduce an additional problem.
But you don't give the solution away... you'll do it in your next email or message.
People will get hooked and avidly waiting.
PAS is great for Problem-aware prospects.
Problem-Aware: The reader knows they have a problem, but they're not aware of the solutions available. PAS is an excellent choice for this level, as it focuses on addressing the problem and showcasing the transformation your product or service can bring.
That's it for today.
Where and how can you use the PAS formula? Or have you used it and got surprising results? I'd love to know.
Stay tuned for part 3 of this series, where we'll dive into the first ever framework that I studied and practiced with back when I started out.
P.S. Want to know how the hell I come up with some of these random stories and ideas you've been reading? You can learn more about my story in a recent interview I did.
Quote and reflection of the day:
You’ll learn the biggest lessons by taking imperfect action over and over. Imperfect action is the training ground for better decision making. Just because you don’t feel ready to act, it doesn’t mean you can’t or that you need to make a perfect decision. There’s no such thing as a perfect decision, and there’s a whole world of possible outcomes out there. Taking action is choosing not to settle for just any of them.
Cheers,
Chris
I'm the founder and chief conversion copywriter at Conversion Alchemy. We help 7 and 8 figure SaaS and Ecommerce businesses convert more website visitors into happy customers. Conversion Alchemy Journal is the collection of my thoughts, ideas, and ramblings on anything copy, UX, conversion rate optimization, psychology, decision-making, human behavior, and -often times - just bizarre, geeky stuff. Grab a cup of coffee and join me. Once a week, every Friday.
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