Welcome to this week's issue of Unpacking Meaning. If you received this from a friend and enjoy it, subscribe here. The best copy doesn't demand attention – it deserves itThe champagne glasses clink softly against the backdrop of murmured conversations. Paris, 1917. You're wandering through a gallery opening, your shoes clicking against the polished wooden floors. The post-war art scene is alive tonight – women in dropped-waist dresses examine bold canvases, men in well-cut suits gesture at experimental sculptures. But there's something else in the air. In the corner, partially hidden behind a large fern, three musicians play... something unusual. The melody doesn't quite catch your ear, yet it's not exactly boring either. A simple piano phrase repeats, then shifts slightly. A violin weaves in and out, never quite taking center stage. The cello provides a foundation so subtle you'd miss it if you weren't paying attention.
This is Erik Satie's idea of "furniture music" – revolutionary for its time. Music deliberately designed to be part of the room's atmosphere, like the velvet curtains or the carefully arranged chairs. Not meant to be actively listened to, but to shape the space itself. Cut to right now: I'm sitting in my office, early morning light filtering through the blinds. My coffee sends up lazy spirals of steam while lo-fi beats pulse gently through my headphones. The track playing has the same qualities as Satie's furniture music – a soft piano loop, barely-there percussion, atmospheric sounds that blend into one another. Like those musicians in 1917, it's creating an environment without demanding attention. It's helping me write this newsletter to you without asking to be the star of the show. This is exactly what your copy needs to do in 2025. We're entering a year where AI-generated content is becoming deafening. Just peek at LinkedIn – it's like walking into a room where everyone has a megaphone and they're all shouting "ENGAGE WITH THIS POST!" Your inbox probably looks the same. Every subject line screaming for attention, every email trying to be more shocking than the last. But great copy? It should work more like that furniture music in the Parisian gallery. Great copy should shape the experience without drawing attention to itself. Guide without grabbing. Persuade without pushing. What does this look like in practice?
When's the last time you consciously noticed the music in your favorite coffee shop? Probably never – but it helped shape your experience. When's the last time you noticed a clearly AI-generated LinkedIn post? Instantly – and probably not in a good way. The power move in 2025 won't be turning up the volume – it'll be mastering the art of subtle influence. Like those musicians behind the fern, your copy should enhance the room without trying to own it. Next time you're writing, ask yourself: Am I creating furniture music or starting a mosh pit? Am I adding to the atmosphere or interrupting it? Don’t get me wrong, I love a good mosh pit, but it also wears me out pretty quick. Here's to more meaningful conversations in 2025. 🎉 Chris P.S. I'm curious – what's the most aggressively attention-seeking copy you've seen lately? Hit reply and let me know. Bonus points if it made you physically cringe. DISCOVERYMy 2024 annual review takeawaysI just posted about what I learned from my annual review for 2024 on Linkedin. My favorite AHA moment (more like "DUH moment"): you can't out-strategize poor execution. All the frameworks in the world won't help if you're not consistently showing up and doing the work. No matter how you feel. Reason why one of my 3 words for the new year is "Mastery". I really do love the craft, and I believe whoever does in their own fields, will win over any AI/tech that will ever be created. Learn my exact copy framework (and do the work)I recently published a 20+ min video where I go pretty deep into my framework for thinking about and writing copy that converts for B2B SaaS like Moz (examples included). Yes it still requires you to do the work, it's not magic, but it does make writing effective copy easier. Book recommendation 📚In a reflective part of the year like the beginning of it, I'm diving into a great book, which, if you look at it close enough, is all about mastery. I'm talking about Consolations by poet/philosopher David Whyte. It's about the meaning of words, and it's almost like a reading meditation. Take this passage about "Ambition": A life’s work is not a series of stepping-stones, onto which we calmly place our feet, but more like an ocean crossing where there is no path, only a heading, a direction, in conversation with the elements. RESONANCE"The goal of civilization seems to be to eliminate work and risk, but the world has changed more than we have." Jack Donovan, The Way of Men What you most fear is often just the pull of something rooted deep inside you. It’s calling you to be truer to yourself. Have a great weekend! Cheers, Chris 🙌🏻 Let’s be friends (unless you’re a stalker) When you're ready, here's a few ways I can help |
I'm the founder and chief conversion copywriter at Conversion Alchemy. We help 7 and 8 figure SaaS and Ecommerce businesses convert more website visitors into happy customers. Conversion Alchemy Journal is the collection of my thoughts, ideas, and ramblings on anything copy, UX, conversion rate optimization, psychology, decision-making, human behavior, and -often times - just bizarre, geeky stuff. Grab a cup of coffee and join me. Once a week, every Friday.
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